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Influence Of Human Beings On The World’s Ecosystem Is Leading To The Extinction Of Many Species and Loss Of Biodiversity

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Due to the constant activity of human beings, many
species
 of flora and fauna are on the verge of extinction and loss of biodiversity.
This
 essay will examine the main causes and possible solutions to
this
problem
. The two main causes of extinction of
species
 are overexploitation of natural
resources
 and an increase in the level of
pollution
. Due to the increase in the population of humans, the demand for basic needs
such
 as a house, water, and other natural
resources
 has increased. , To meet the demands, natural habitats of many
species
 are destroyed which is affecting the natural ecosystem.
Moreover
,
pollution
 has become a major issue in recent times because of industrialization.
As a result
, there is a tremendous increase in the level of air
pollution
 as well as water
pollution
. Because of that a lot of
species
 die out.
For instance
, in a recent ,study it was found that toxic waste which is dumped in the river from factories is responsible for the annihilation of many
species
 of fish.
Therefore
, it is really important to safeguard bio-diversity and control the deterioration of air quality. Some possible solutions to
this
problem
 are protecting natural
resources
 and promoting awareness among people. By protecting areas where human activity is limited and avoiding overexploitation of its
resources
, we can save the untouched environment and prevent
species
 from dying out.
Moreover
, the
next
 step in fighting biodiversity loss is informing the general population about the dangers of
this
problem
.
This
 way, people will be more conscious of the environment and won’t overuse or destroy its
resources
. To conclude, people’s activities that change the environment have a negative impact on the world’s ecosystem.
However
, we can significantly lessen the extinction of
species
 by protecting natural areas and enlightening people about
this
problem
.
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