You believe that your local library needs some improvements. Write a letter to the library manager to suggest changes. In your letter: explain why you think the library needs improvements, suggest what changes should be made, invite the manager to discuss your suggestions in more detail.

Dear Library Manager, I hope
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letter finds you well. I am writing to express my concern about some aspects of our local library that I believe could benefit from improvements.
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the library offers a good selection of books, many of them are outdated, and there are limited study spaces available.
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, the lack of modern technology
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as computers and free Wi-Fi makes it difficult for students and researchers to fully utilize the library’s resources. I would like to suggest updating the book collection with more recent publications, adding more comfortable seating and quiet study areas, and providing better technological facilities like free internet access and additional computers. Organizing regular community events
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as book clubs or workshops could
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help increase engagement. I would love the opportunity to meet with you to discuss these suggestions
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. Please let me know a convenient time for a meeting. Yours sincerely,
Asliddin
Correct your spelling
Aladdin

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coherence and cohesion
Consider breaking down the suggestions into separate paragraphs for better clarity and emphasis.
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You could include specific examples of outdated books or types of technology needed for a stronger argument.
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The tone is very polite and appropriate for a formal letter, which effectively conveys your respect for the library manager.
coherence and cohesion
The letter has a clear logical structure with an introduction, body suggestions, and a closing invitation, making it easy to follow.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite
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