Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantage?

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I am not visiting
restorants
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restaurants
so often, but there is one
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restaurant
restorant
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restaurant
in Barcelona I had dinner once with my boyfriend. That was a fish
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restaurant
restorant
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restaurant
near Marina Vela Barcelona. The atmosphere of the restaurant was cosy and warm. Near the
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enter
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of the
restaurant
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street musicians were playing folk
spanish
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music so charmingly  and cute that
and
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passersby were
gaving
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giving
them
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coins.
Weiters
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Writers
were so friendly, but we have been
waiting
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our order for a long time, probably because the
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restaurant
restorant
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restaurant
was full. It was Friday. We ordered Paella, mussel, salmon with
qinoa
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quinoa
and 2 glasses of white wine. It was too much for
two
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, but we are big eaters with him.  Everything was amazing! Only one thing I could suggest is to
rise
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the level of
weiter's
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English because they have known only
basik
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basic
back
words, despite it is a
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touristic
place. In
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conclusion
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concllusion
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I want to say that the dinner was lovely and exquisite and I would recommend
this
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restaurant
restorant
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everyone
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who has
trip
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to Barcelona.
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