The charts show what ik graduated and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college. Summer is the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show what ik graduated and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college.

Summer is the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts illustrate how many graduates and postgraduate
students
did part-time jobs, voluntary
work
,
further
study, or went unemployed excluding full-time
work
after, they left the university in 2008, in the UK.
Overall
, the most popular destination for both university graduates and postgraduates was
further
studies and the least went into voluntary
work
. The destination of post-graduate
students
also
showed a similar pattern to what graduates did after leaving the university. In terms of destination of graduate
students
in the UK,29665 of
students
continued
further
study and it was the largest group
while
, the lowest group of
students
did voluntary
work
at 3500,
showed
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showing
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a significant difference between the counts.
However
, the number of
students
who went on part-time
work
and end up with unemployed depicted nearly similar values at 17,735 and 16,235 respectively.
On the other hand
,
while
, most of the post-graduate
students
continued
further
study at 2725, the fewest number of
students
did voluntary
work
, which was 345.
Furthermore
, the
second
most count of
students
who went into a part-time job was 2535, and the quantity of unemployed post-graduate
students
was slightly lower than part-time employees, which was 1625.
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