Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.  Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

There is a growing number of
people
that settle abroad after graduation for professional life. There are those who support the idea that specialists ought to work in the
country
where they got an education whereas opponents believe that
such
people
may live in totally different
countries
based on their priorities. The latter idea seems
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sensible in terms of economic
conditions
and living standards. To clarify, both views will be evaluated in
this
essay. On the one hand, Being educated and working in the same
country
ease to fulfil responsibilities. It is mainly because each
country
gives an education based on its system which is essential for qualification.
For instance
, In Turkey, students are getting familiar with professional lives in a university by doing an internship that lasts one year.
Moreover
, taking into account that many
countries
offer free education from elementary school to university,
therefore
professional life may be considered as compensation.
In other words
, when professional
people
work in their
countries
, they do not only make a social contribution but
also
provide economic power.
On the other hand
, in fact,
people
involved in the same occupational groups live in mainly different
conditions
because of a
country
.
This
notion pushes
people
to make changes in their lives to have better living standards. Amount of wage, social rights, cultural features and even globalization would be great examples of these
conditions
.
In addition
to
this
, some occupations require highly technological materials to make research like genetic engineering.
However
, especially for developing states, to supply these materials or allocate a regular fund to these researches may be deemed redundant compared to essential requirements. Indeed,
such
conditions
promote professionals to move to developed
countries
. In conclusion, there is a dilemma whether qualified
people
should work in the
country
they trained or they can move to a different
country
if they want. I am of the opinion that,
people
have the freedom to choose the place they live because of the reasons I have mentioned.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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