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You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months say how your work could be done while you are away ask for his/her help in arranging it Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Mr George, I am writing to express my interest in working at our company headquarters in the United Kingdom for a few months to
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 enhance my skills and get exposure to the global market trends of our products so that I can better contribute to my company and carry out my responsibilities more efficiently. As you know, I have been recently promoted to the assistant product manager post and I am working hard to collaborate with my team to enhance the sales and increase our brand reputation.
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, I have been feeling the need to meet and
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 with our global team members and attend some training sessions that our head
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 in London arranges frequently. I am quite positive that the opportunity to
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 in our company’s head
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 for six months will
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exposure to the global market trend. I have talked to Julian and he has agreed to take up my responsibilities during my absence.
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, I will check my emails daily, and be available for emergency phone calls. Once I get back to the
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, I would endeavour to
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 extra hours in order to catch up on anything I had missed.
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, I would need your support to get the approvals so that I can
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 in our company’s head
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 for six months and fulfil the objectives. I look forward to your positive reply. Yours sincerely, Charles Hugo
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professional development
  • global operations
  • cross-functional
  • remote work
  • progress updates
  • logistical arrangements
  • cultural exchange
  • continuity plan
  • enhance my skillset
  • broaden my horizons
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