The only way to reduce drug abuse is to legalise the substance and bring them under control. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that

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abuse

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is an extremely serious problem. It leads to a large number of social and criminal issues. Some people believe that if the

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is taken under

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and under laws, the facets of

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abuse

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will

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decrease.

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, I cannot totally agree with

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view. I am concerned that legalizing the

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would cause other

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. Understandably, governments look for ways to reduce

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abuse

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and one way is to legalize and

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the

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. Following

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, the governments would know the origin of drugs and

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uncover the prevalent use of drugs

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areas.

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, they would

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in the right direction. A good example of

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is The legalization of cannabis in the Netherlands, which has successfully reduced criminalization.

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, the legalization of the

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leads to many

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as addiction. To be more precise, when the

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is not against the law, It is easy to possess. If people use it more than usual, they will become addicted and get

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overdosed.

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, in the case of cannabis, since it is legal in Thailand, the latest news reports that many people died from a cannabis overdose.

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, if the

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is brought from a general shop, parents will be concerned about their

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and restrict their behaviour.

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, the parents might monitor all activities of

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as learning, playing and shopping to avoid using drugs that lead

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to suffer from too much restriction. In conclusion, there are many ways to reduce

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abuse

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. One of these is to take it to legal and

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it. It could be argued that the legalization of substances not only causes health

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, it

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causes too much

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behaviour of

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.

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we should find other ways to get rid of

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problem.