In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas.

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Nowadays, the trend to watch TV crime dramas and read books of breach novels has become popular. In

this

essay, I will give the potential explanation for

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preference and give my opinion about those genres.

To begin

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my view,

people

nowadays like to watch thriller movies which

helps

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them to get a chill. There are several types of movies and novels but crime genres contain suspense which

attract

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persons

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to stay until

last

. As an example, Mission Impossible is a film series and has six parts. All parts come with the same end that Tom Cruise the lead actor in the movie killed the enemy but still

people

like to watch

this

movie. I have two different opinions about

this

Firstly

, the positive side of

this

is many crime novels and dramas are based on real stories which help

people

to get aware of

such

scenarios and how criminals trapped naive humans to theft, murder and many reasons.

Although

such

books and shows have good impacts on society we can not forget the bad impacts too. There are many

people

who are affected by these

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book

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and TV

drama

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. They become introverted and feel that everyone surrounding them

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criminal and they can not trust them. For avoiding

this

people

have to share stories of the dramas and books with their kith and kin like how heroes kill or catch the villain. In conclusion,

this

trend has merits and demerits. No matter how individuals enjoyed the whole actions and violence but they adore sides of

this

, maybe

this

is the reason behind the popularity of

such

television shows.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people prefer to plan all their vacation activities while others prefer to be spontaneous. Which do you prefer? Why?

Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

You had some photos of your family taken by a professional photographer. Write a letter to the photographer. In your letter - say that you liked his/her photos of your family - ask him/her to be your photographer at a special family event - give him/her the details of the event.

Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?