some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some parts of society think acceptance of hardships like;low payment and
unpleasant
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job
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is
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better than fighting for
it
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them
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.
By contrast
, others believe the best action is to try to exit from bad positions. In
this
essay why I believe hard work is better than satisfaction as well as respect
to
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others
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opinion
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will be discussed. On the one hand, being satisfied with a normal life is a safe way for living in
peaceful
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environment.
Firstly
, most
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the
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peoples
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priority is stable revenue because their lives completely depend on their income.
In addition
, they can not afford
cost
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of living without
monthly
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salary.
Secondly
, human being naturally prefers a stable lifestyle in their specific comfort zone as well as sticking to a regular routine. It could be a pleasure for many.
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;
young
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generation tends to have a steady schedule after years of education at school and university ,
this
way they can rest and behave normally.
On the other hand
, To want a better life needs a warrior in every situation,
Although
it is hard and risky
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it is
worthy
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to fight
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for
better
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a better
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income and experience
higher
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a higher
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level of living . It seems most
of
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successful
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people were not satisfied with their level of knowledge , skills and income.
For instance
; Becoming a manager in every company required many skills , ability and experience but being a satisfied person may not leads you to another level. In conclusion, living in a satisfactory way is easier than being ambitious , but some people prefer to fight for more in every step of their limited life. I believe living out of
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zone may be challenging but it is valuable for the future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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