some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation , such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some parts of society think acceptance of hardships like;low payment and
unpleasant
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the unpleasant
job
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jobs
is
better than fighting for Change the verb form
are
it
. Correct pronoun usage
them
By contrast
, others believe the best action is to try to exit from bad positions. In this
essay why I believe hard work is better than satisfaction as well as respect to
Change preposition
for
others
Change noun form
others'
other's
opinion
will be discussed.
On the one hand, being satisfied with a normal life is a safe way for living in Fix the agreement mistake
opinions
peaceful
environment. Add an article
a peaceful
Firstly
, most of
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apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
peoples
priority is stable revenue because their lives completely depend on their income. Change to a genitive case
people's
peoples'
In addition
, they can not afford cost
of living without Add an article
the cost
monthly
salary. Correct article usage
a monthly
Secondly
, human being naturally prefers a stable lifestyle in their specific comfort zone as well as sticking to a regular routine. It could be a pleasure for many. For example
; young
generation tends to have a steady schedule after years of education at school and university , Correct article usage
the young
this
way they can rest and behave normally.
On the other hand
, To want a better life needs a warrior in every situation, Although
it is hard and risky but
it is Remove the conjunction
apply
worthy
Replace the word
worth
to fight
for Change the verb form
fighting
better
income and experience Correct article usage
a better
higher
level of living . It seems most Correct article usage
a higher
of
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apply
successful
people were not satisfied with their level of knowledge , skills and income. Add an article
the successful
For instance
; Becoming a manager in every company required many skills , ability and experience but being a satisfied person may not leads you to another level.
In conclusion, living in a satisfactory way is easier than being ambitious , but some people prefer to fight for more in every step of their limited life. I believe living out of comfort
zone may be challenging but it is valuable for the future.Correct pronoun usage
my comfort
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