You are planning a two-week vacation, and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • tell your neighbor that you are going away • ask your neighbor to take care of your house for you • explain what tasks you would like your neighbor to do

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Dear Anna , Hope you are doing well?. I hereby write

this

letter to inform you that

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I am

Iam

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I am

planning a

short term

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vacation

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week. I have planned a trip to my hometown. My

cousin

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brother is getting married on

15th

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the 15th

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of April .So I have planned a

two week

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journey for attending the function. I will leave the house

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monday

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morning and my return journey will be

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scheduled

schduled

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scheduled

on 3oth f April. The function is held

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Tamil Nadu. He is one of my favourite

counsines

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counties

cousins

cuisines

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could not rid

the

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function.

Hence

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and husband are going to attend the party. I require

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apply

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miniscule

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minuscule

helps

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help

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from your side. Recently I brought some plants and planted

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them in

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our garden. Because of the excessive

sweltering

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they need regular water every day.

Besides

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I have arranged a plumber for the renovation work

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saturday

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. Could you please open the door for him

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I will give the key to you for opening the house. Regards, Maya

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firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

170 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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