You are planning a two-week vacation, and you need someone to take care of your house while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter • tell your neighbor that you are going away • ask your neighbor to take care of your house for you • explain what tasks you would like your neighbor to do

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Dear Anna , Hope you are doing well?. I hereby write

this

letter to inform you that

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I am

Iam

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I am

planning a

short term

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vacation

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week. I have planned a trip to my hometown. My

cousin

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brother is getting married on

15th

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the 15th

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of April .So I have planned a

two week

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journey for attending the function. I will leave the house

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monday

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morning and my return journey will be

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scheduled

schduled

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scheduled

on 3oth f April. The function is held

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Tamil Nadu. He is one of my favourite

counsines

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counties

cousins

cuisines

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could not rid

the

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of the

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function.

Hence

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and husband are going to attend the party. I require

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miniscule

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minuscule

helps

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help

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from your side. Recently I brought some plants and planted

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them in

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our garden. Because of the excessive

sweltering

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they need regular water every day.

Besides

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I have arranged a plumber for the renovation work

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saturday

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. Could you please open the door for him

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I will give the key to you for opening the house. Regards, Maya

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
25
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

170 words

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