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Some museums have an admission charge while some do not. In my opinion, the drawbacks of an entrance fee are eclipsed by its benefits in the sense that the income will be ploughed back into operation and development of the museums.

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Nowadays many cultural centres like
museums
 have an admission charge
therefore
 some
don'tt
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don't
 . I believe the
museums
 must have some charge for entrance. I would argue about my points of view and own reasons.
Firstly
, all the organizations have different costs and they have to pay all the expenses in
order
 to handle their business and
support
 all the staff and utilities.
Museums
 have many extra expenses
such
 as security affairs, researchers, keeping the items healthy and many other things. In ,fact taking some money via selling the ticket could be so valuable for the museum in
order
 to
support
 financial matters.For ,instance louvre museum has several million visitors every year, by simple ,calculation we would find that they could have huge earnings every day and they have a continuous income.
Then
 we could found out that earning via selling vouchers could have a great daily economical
support
.
Additionally
, in my ,opinion whenever a service is free for everyone, the people can not feel the value of that. and they won't consider these kinds of great opportunities, so they wouldn't rather participate in
order
 to
themuse
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the muse
. For ,instance libraries are mostly free in most countries but ,
unfortunately
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 many people don't care about
this
 grateful opportunity.
although
 they have lots of costs in
order
 to give the best services to society.
then
 I believe that whenever we are looking to encourage the people to absorb the related consumer and visitor we must have some entrance Charge. but with a nice marketing policy have some offer for free or much reduction for some groups
such
 as students, researchers, seniors and etc. In
this
 ,
the
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case they could have some income for their
support
 and show the value of their job and make the best Marketing for their services. In ,
the
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conclusion I would mention
however
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museums
 are social and cultural organizations. But I believe it would be a better policy to sell tickets at an affordable price for different customer types.
Also
 by making a stable income they would be able to continue their jobs and may develop and expand more.
On the other
hand
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 having a Price strategy for different users would best encourage more participation.
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