You recently stayed at a hotel for a conference with your company and there were several problems with your room. Write to the hotel management to complain. Include •Where you stayed •What the problems were •How they can fix your complaints

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well, my name is Prabhnoor Kaur, manager of "Brar Hotels''. As, I stayed in your hotel for a conference with my company, but I found many issues with your hotel services. When we reached your staff made us wait for a long time at the reception because we need keys for opening the room, they were busy

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attending a call.

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, in the room there was a problem with the tables it looked old-fashioned and broke from the side legs. That made my impression on my colleagues. As, I paid $1000 for the booking and your rating was 4.5,

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I thought that could be the best place for a meeting. Well, I may suggest you some changes, which

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show strictness with your staff members, when they attend personal calls

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at work.

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, bring some brand new furniture that will increase your reputation among other hotels.

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, that will have a positive impact on reviews on social media if you adjust these things. I will be waiting for your prompt reply. Sincerely, Prabhnoor Kaur