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Modern families nowadays have to face many new problems. What are the main problems they have to deal with?

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It is not easy to have peaceful daily
life
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 among more and more families. Troubles continuously come out from
people
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's normal
life
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. I will discuss the main
problems
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 where
people
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 are concerned most,
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 as working and living pressure. Everyone needs to have a job to make
life
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.
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 why the majority of
people
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 need to spend plenty of
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 dealing with working questions.
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, keeping a good relationship with colleagues is a potential reason why troubles are generated. There is a common belief that communication is the root cause of
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.
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, the words or sentences said by someone may misunderstand by others.
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, everyone needs to work harder for their living expenses. The only way for
people
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 to earn money is to make sure all the tasks can be accomplished in
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.
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, the difficulty of each task is varied. Employees will become nervous or have negative emotions if they can not finish their goals by the due date.
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, living
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 will
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's
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. Parents need to pay extra attention to their children's education. Not only on the school education but
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 on their mental health. Parents are the most important
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 teacher for their children. Apart from their work, other things
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 play a vital role in adults'
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,
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, companying with parents and hanging out with their friends.
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 stuff will consume as much as energy while they are working. In conclusion, these two main
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 are taking part most of the
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 in adults' daily
life
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 these annoying things are filled in our lives, we still need to have a positive emotion to overcome the coming problem each day.
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