Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children Do you agree or disagree?

In the digital age, It is no doubt that electronic devices like

computers

are very common in our daily lives. Some people argued that

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overusing them will bring negative effects rather than positive on our children. I agree with

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statement and will discuss both points of view in the following essay. For the negative aspects, if children spend too much screen time not only

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their physical health

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as eyesight

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but

also

affects their social communication skills.

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, many youngsters

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not have the

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ability so

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they get addicted easier to some online games. They are willing to put more and more time into those games

instead

of chatting with their peers or talking to adults. It may lead them to become isolated in society and have less interaction

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other people. As for the positive impacts, it is true that those devices can provide alternative ways to add extra information for learning. When teachers or parents are not able to explain

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or teach their children,

computers

or other applications are the different channels of study. Some of them have various materials like videos and small games, designed for different ages which can enhance their interests. While study becomes more interesting and fun, toddlers will become more proactive to learn and explore new things every day. In conclusion,

computers

have brought many benefits, yet I believe excessive use in relation to

computers

is likely to produce many

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at a young age

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if they are not able to use them correctly.