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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? high tuition fees supporting family What solutions can you suggest? grants , scholarships , apply for less courses in each semester

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Education is a major part of one's life, despite some
students
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 may not give their time to studying, because they have to work part-time, which causes lacking time for learning. The essay not only discusses the reasons in my opinion for
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 phenomenon but
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 some relevant solutions.
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 with, the causes for the same include,
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, they cannot afford the expenses of institutions,though the entire family is working.
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, children from daily labours family, hardly study because of their financial conditions, whereas, fees are skyrocketing ,
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, the
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 should definitely work.
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, some people may be raised by a single parent, so, in order to cope with the household and schooling expenditures, it is necessary for them to join a job.
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, my friend works as a receptionist in a hotel, since his mother is the only breadwinner of their family because he has no father.
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, the above-mentioned are the reasons. The possible solutions to
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 trend are, that the government should offer scholarships and grants,
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, a larger extent of inhabitants may fully focus on their studies.
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,
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, who find it difficult for paying tuition fees, can avail
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 offers and can complete their education successfully.
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, the authorities should pass a GO on 100% fee reimbursement for merit
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,
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, helping them in building a bright future, which in turn benefits society. To conclude, I think supporting the family as well as cannot afford to clear the institutional charges are major factors of the habitats to work while studying. Whereas, remedies are funding them with scholarships,
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 of their academic performances.
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