Some people think that schools should select students only according to their academic abilities while others believe that it is better to consider students’ other abilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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The academic intelligence of children plays a significant role in their future. Today, many people believe that admission criteria for school should be only on the basis of one's performance in studies,

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is contradicted by others who want

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to take into9 account other creative and physical abilities as well.

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essay will discuss both arguments and state why being good at studies should not be the basis of selection.

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off, intelligent

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tend to bring fame to their school.

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is due to their outstanding achievements in formal examinations, leading to increased admission to schools. As it is education quality that people consider before admitting their child and the same is reflected in schools'

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' performance.

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, teachers feel less tired teaching these

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. The mind of these

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is mostly active during the classes and so, less energy and time a teacher would spend on them, as class learners would grasp information quickly.

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, the more intelligent learners a school would have, the greater will be its fame and the least tired the faculties teaching there will be.

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, a sense of inequality prevails among children. It is apparent that everyone has some special qualities which are different from being good at studying, and

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should be cherished equally because if

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did not take in these

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, it would make them feel their abilities are not worth anything.

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may occasionally result in serious mental health problems.

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, interschool competitions require diverse participation. Nowadays, competitions like dance, sports, and creative activities among

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are frequently organized, and to perform well here, schools must have excellent dancers, athletes and creative minds, which are, most of the time,

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who are average in academics.

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, equal treatment and interschool games call for the selection criteria to be wide and diverse. To conclude, In my view, it is essential that admission standards of

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must be impartial to the student's academic performance and

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, every ability of theirs' must be respected and encouraged.

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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