In some countries , more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages.
With
this
advanced ,technology most families have become nuclear. In some nations, a large number of adults
are choosing to live with their parents
after they have completed their education and are selected by companies. The main benefits are that they can support their older parents
and backbone of their family, while the main drawbacks are they depend on their parents
and don’t have the ability to take responsibility for their own and, I will explain my reason for it.
On the one hand, there are many benefits for adults
to continue living with their parents
after finding jobs and finishing their education. First
and foremost, adults
can support and look after older parents
in their later age, which all parents
hope from their children. Secondly
, adults
are the backbone of their family, this
is because they are young in their abode and also
acquire a lot of knowledge which is necessary to live in this
modern world. In addition
, with the advanced technology now thing
have changed, and sometimes older people feel uncomfortable dealing with that, so if their children live with them Fix the agreement mistake
things
then
they can teach their parents
about new technologies. For example
, in India, now current bills are coming in a
digitalised forms which Correct article usage
apply
parents
feel difficult
to understand. Add a missing verb
is difficult
Also
, living with family creates more strong bond between children and parents
.
On the other hand
, it also
has some disadvantages. Firstly
, people, who live with their parents
are more dependent on their parents
, as a result
, they don’t have the ability to take responsibility for their own. Furthermore
, by residing at parental houses adults
became lazier and, pampered adults
don’t try to run their families even after marriage. For example
, in India, I have seen that more adults
depend on their parents
even after marriage and spend their lives on their guardian's income. Consequently
, they become frustrated after their elder’s absence. These problems can be eliminated by earning money from an early age and trying to become a responsible person or self-dependent.
In conclusion, in my opinion, adults
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who live
live
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living
parents
after their education and got
jobs Wrong verb form
getting
have
more advantages than demerits because they support their family and cope with their Add the particle
to have
parents
with these new technologies along with making stronger bonds with their parents
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