You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Jashanpreet Kaur and I am writing

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letter to ask for some information in order to join your gymnasium and sports club.

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, I would like to know about the various plans that the place offers.

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, I am most interested in the aerobics class that I saw in the brochure in yesterday's newspaper (January 07). Kindly note that I have a budget of $120 per month.

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, if you could provide me with some information about the events that are to be held on the premises, I would really appreciate it. I am looking forward to any activities that can teach a new skill

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as full-body flexibility training.

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, I have been looking for somebody who could assist me in applying for the program as it seems quite complicated. Could you please ask a faculty member to call and help me in the navigation of the process ? I will make sure to attach my contact information below. I hope that I will get your assistance as soon as possible. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Jashan 9039103800

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Coherence and Cohesion

Ensure all sentences are concise for even greater coherence.

Task Achievement

Make sure to include even more specific questions about the activities to gain maximum information.

Task Achievement

The letter clearly follows the requested structure and addresses all aspects of the task.

Coherence and Cohesion

The letter is well-organized with clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific point.

Writing Tone

The tone is polite and appropriate for a formal letter to a gym manager.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

10 paragraphs

188 words

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