Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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is the similarity between countries. I believe
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used in that region due to transportation problems and transfer information problems, but in the
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in calm when we want to go abroad without any stress like for making food, cars.
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are at risk and it causes the un employee is growing ,the ensuing drop in
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welfare of them. In conclusion, I believe, the similarity is
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idea and it is one of the ways for developing and globalization, and it reduces the stress
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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