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To learn A foreign langauge it is necessary to live in the country where it is spoken. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Learning a foreign
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 a great role in human life. Some
people
 believe that in order to learn a non-native
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language
langauge
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language
, it is necessary for
people
 to live in the nation where it is spoken. I strongly agree with
this
 statement and,
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 will explain my reason for it in the upcoming
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. There are many reasons why a foreign
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language
languages
langauges
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 is required for
people
 to move
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 a
country
 where it is spoken.
First
 and foremost, it helps individuals to communicate with local
people
.
In other words
, learning
native
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language
langauge
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language
 of
other
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another country
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country
it
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is beneficial for
people
 to talk with them very easily.
For example
, those students are move for abroad for
tehir
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their
further
 education they required to learn
this
particualr
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particular
country
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langauge
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language
,
as a result
, it will be easy for students to survive in
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 environment.
Secondly
,knowing a foreign
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language
langauge
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language
 make
ourself
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 confident to talk with that particular
country
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people
 and easily know about their culture.
Furthermore
, learning a non-native
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language
langauge
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language
 helps to find
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employment
employement
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employment
 in
other
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country
. To illustrate
this
, if you have
a
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fluency in
spanish
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Spanish
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 which is now
major
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in
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trend and spoken by
million
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millions
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 of
people
 in the world, which helps individuals to find jobs in
spanish
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Spanish
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 countries like
spain
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Spain
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 and brazil.
Also
, knowing
particular
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a particular
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country
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langauge
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language
it
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improves accent.
For example
, in a recent survey, it can be seen that 99% of
indian
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imrove
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improve
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live
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 in
English speaking
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 countries like the USA and Uk. In conclusion,
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practice on a regular basis helps
people
 to improve their non-native language along with accent.
However
, in my opinion,
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 think that it is necessary for
people
 to learn a foreign language which is spoken in that
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particular
particualr
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particular
country
 where they are moving.
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