Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country. b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

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Dear Abhinav, How're you? Hope

this

letter finds you well. You would be delighted to know about the expo 2022 event going to happen

month on 22nd July 2022, in Abu Dhabi. I've got the extra two passes for the exhibition as I'm a volunteer at the event. I know how much you're passionate about the latest tech, so I am inviting you to visit it. I'm sure, you would be amused to see the pavilions. It is organised by the government of UAE and most countries around the world will be taking part in it to showcase their latest technological advancements. It is going to be a month-long event with the closing day on the 22nd of August. I suggest planning at least a week's visit.

Moreover

, since it's the tourist season here, I'm planning to take you to other destinations where you can experience adventures like desert safari and sky diving. We can

also

plan to see Burj Khalifa and the Museum of future in Dubai. Of course, it will be your

first

time in the country, you must stay with us. I really hope you'll be able to come over and write back soon, Take care, Rubina

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