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Dear Abhinav, How're you? Hope

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letter finds you well. You would be delighted to know about the expo 2022 event going to happen

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month on 22nd July 2022, in Abu Dhabi. I've got the extra two passes for the exhibition as I'm a volunteer at the event. I know how much you're passionate about the latest tech, so I am inviting you to visit it. I'm sure, you would be amused to see the pavilions. It is organised by the government of UAE and most countries around the world will be taking part in it to showcase their latest technological advancements. It is going to be a month-long event with the closing day on the 22nd of August. I suggest planning at least a week's visit.

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, since it's the tourist season here, I'm planning to take you to other destinations where you can experience adventures like desert safari and sky diving. We can

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plan to see Burj Khalifa and the Museum of future in Dubai. Of course, it will be your

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time in the country, you must stay with us. I really hope you'll be able to come over and write back soon, Take care, Rubina

msrubinagillMon Jul 18 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

201 words

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Write a letter to your friend who lives in another country and in your letter: a. Invite him/her to a public event in your country. b. Describe the public event. c. Explain about other plans you have for your friend when he/she will visit.

Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are challenging the quality of life.do you think that environmental problems will produce better results if it is addressed globally or should be addressed by individual countries?

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You had to cancel a meeting with a friend. Write a letter to him/her, in your letter - Apologise for cancelling the meeting - Explain why you couldn't be there - Suggest an alternative day when you could meet

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