As cyber-perpetration is becoming a main online problem, social media and technological companies should be obligated by government to launch strict policy(ies) against cyber-bullying. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The rise of modern communication instruments, which exploit the Internet, has completely changed our society in the

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three decades, bringing an endless number of opportunities and benefits, but

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lots of drawbacks

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as cyber-bullying. I firmly condemn

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kind of behaviour and I am aware that people alone cannot fight easily

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phenomenon.

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, I support the idea that companies and governments should create strict policies against it, starting with some ideas that I will explain in the

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, cyber-bullying leads to the isolation and eventually the death of millions of people every year. It is

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terrible cancer that could be cured with laws that in the

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place protect the victims of these episodes.

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, a teenager

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bullied by others on the Internet can develop the need to isolate himself from the rest of the world, and the possibility of seeing a psychologist paid by public taxes might be of easier access for him when compared to a private specialist, especially if he does not have a rich family.

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, it is extremely necessary for governments to create a series of mental support services for them, limiting the number of suicides or mental illnesses that keeps appearing.

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, companies and politicians should always support campaigns against cyber-bullying.

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, important brands

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as Apple, Amazon or Microsoft, which owns multiple social media platforms, given their important public role, should always side with people against

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bad behaviour.

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, campaigns against

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issue, if supported by big companies, might be reached

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a bigger audience. To conclude, it is really important for our world to eradicate

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dangerous problem starting from its roots, and with the help of powerful positions could really shift our whole society in the right direction.