You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meetin

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Dear’s

neighbors

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How are you?

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,Hop

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Hop

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you are doing well, I am writing

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letter to inform you about issues at our share parking. There is some problem at our parking makes me complain

such

as wrong parking, visitor

take

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a lot of time in our parking,

however

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our children they play football at the yard of parking. I would like to give you some

suggest

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that solve organize our issues,

first

all

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we need to make the parking lots numbered, we put some charge at the parking, so when our

guest

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come to visit as they must

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buy for them parking ,but we should make the parking cheapest for our visitor ,

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to that we have to stop playing at the yard of parking. I would like to meet with you to discuss our problem and

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Wednesday at my home. Best Regards Abdulaziz

Submitted by alruhaimi6 on Tue Jul 19 2022

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

150 words

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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meetin

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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