You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meetin

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Dear’s

neighbors

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How are you?

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,Hop

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Hop

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you are doing well, I am writing

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letter to inform you about issues at our share parking. There is some problem at our parking makes me complain

such

as wrong parking, visitor

take

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a lot of time in our parking,

however

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our children they play football at the yard of parking. I would like to give you some

suggest

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that solve organize our issues,

first

all

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we need to make the parking lots numbered, we put some charge at the parking, so when our

guest

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come to visit as they must

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apply

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buy for them parking ,but we should make the parking cheapest for our visitor ,

in addition

to that we have to stop playing at the yard of parking. I would like to meet with you to discuss our problem and

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Wednesday at my home. Best Regards Abdulaziz

Submitted by alruhaimi6 on Tue Jul 19 2022

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I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

150 words

6.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a possible meetin

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Study needs time, peace and comfort, whereas employment needs the same thing. Someone says it is impossible to combine those two because one distracts one another. Do you think this is realistic in our life today?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What can be done to deal with this situation?

Some people think that schools should reward students with best academic results, while others believe that it is more important to reward students who show improvements. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In the future it may be necessary for us to live on other planets. For this reason some people believe that we should spend money now to research other planets, such as Mars. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.