Nowadays in many countries people are spending too much on weddings some people think that it is essential to spend a huge amount of money on wedding ceremonies others think that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion

In recent years, providing

a wedding ceremonies

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in many different ways,

spending

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more

money

, has become

unquestionable

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issue.

Therefore

, some individuals have an idea to hold those ceremonies simple, while others strongly believe that, it is important to expand a great deal of

money

.

This

essay will discuss both statements and will present my personal opinion.

To begin

with, people

decire

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desire

decide

to make the wedding day memorable, having

well-paid

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job to save

money

for

this

special day.

Therefore

, hosts

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organize

orginize

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organise

fireworks, must-have

cake

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,

expensive

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decoration

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with real flowers to show their financial status to guests, approving their wealth.

However

,

money

could be

outlayed

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outlawed

on

property

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the property

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,

such

as on travelling, on future baby`s health-care,education or even on buying their own car,

instead

of

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event

.

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is

more

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valuable

expenses

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and

make

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two couple`s life happier.

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6% of divorce reasons. What is more, there have been some people to get

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depression after the

event

.

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means,

some

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that some

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family

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families

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, who cannot afford

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wedding

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weddings

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, want to have the time of their life, borrowing credit loans or debts from other relatives.

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,

this

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individuals become

defaulter

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, harming their own health.

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,

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majority

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occasions

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, it ends with

divorse

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divorce

diverse

or worse serious problems.

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, due to the fact, the United nations` annual report

show

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5% of assisted suicide are humans with

a great borrows

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. In conclusion, in my own view, there are

not

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benefits from arranging

high-paid

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wedding

event

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, except

of

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for good memories.

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, it both harmful and inapplicable to spent too much on that

event

.At

this

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time

tim

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time

,

instead

of enjoying their new life, those people will continue to pay off debt bills.