IELTS Writing Correction Service
Writing Samples
Band 8

The system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. This is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter -describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly -explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours -suggest what should be done about the problem

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am an inhabitant of Amir Temur Street and I am writing to you (in order) to complain about the issues of the garbage collection system in our neighbourhood. Our local area is full of breathtaking views and attractive places.
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, these days, we are suffering from the system of collecting rubbish seriously.
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 they used to collect trash twice a week, now they barely come to gather it once a fortnight.
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 of
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, the amount of garbage is increasing rapidly. Without a doubt,
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 problem is causing a variety of diseases,
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 as an allergy, infections and a lack of breathing because of the terrible smell among the residents, especially youngsters and the elderly. I suggest that you should take more employees on
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 system or we are eager to do community work to clean the environment as volunteers. I would appreciate it if you could put the workers under control. I look forward to receiving your prompt reply to my letter and a solution to
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 issue at your earliest convenience. Yours sincerely, David Clarkson
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear progression of ideas throughout, maintaining a logical and cohesive structure.
task achievement
Use a more consistently formal tone suitable for the target reader, which is the local council in this case.
task achievement
Attempt to elaborate more on each point, providing detailed explanations or examples where appropriate.
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