Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative trend?
In the few decades, there is a growing proportion of the world’s population who decide to delayed parenthood. The underlying reasons for
this
trend are varied, and I suppose that the merits would eclipse the downsides.
There are two main factors leading to the decision of delaying childbirth. The first
one is because people have the propensity for prioritizing their careers over taking parental roles. Raising a child is extortionately expensive with precarious financial resources, especially females
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for females
don’t
want to risk their careers and become housewives having unpaid housework Correct pronoun usage
who don’t
such
as laundry, babysitting, cooking
. Correct word choice
and cooking
Therefore
, many couples want to stabilize their finance before becoming parents so as to provide their
kids and accommodate every demand with sufficient living Change preposition
for their
condition
for their future development. Another explanation for Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
this
is that many modern individuals have adopted a fear of taking unwanted custody due to the rise of divorce in recent years. It is because premature marriages have become common, which usually goes with many couples
doubt Change noun form
couples'
couple's
of
their marital harmony. There would be fewer kids growing up without fatherhood or motherhood.
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about
However
, the drawbacks should not be overlooked. In fact, raising children at old age is more arduous than that at a young age, not only because their health will decline but also
their
children are too little to self-manage. Correct word choice
because their
Additionally
, it could both heighten the possibility infertility
among mothers at their old age and the Change preposition
of infertility
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newborn
new born
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newborn
babies
mental and physical health: increased risk for miscarriage and birth defects, Change noun form
babies'
baby's
premature
Correct word choice
and premature
labor
. Down syndrome could be a typical example of the problems that those kids might have to suffer from.
In conclusion, I Change the spelling
labour
convinced
that the positive sides of Add a missing verb
am convinced
this
trend are more significant than the negative sides, giving more opportunities for better woman’s
and Change the noun form
women
woman
children
education and jobs.Change noun form
children's
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