A friend from another country is moving to your city for work. He / she has asked you for advice about living in your city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter suggest an interesting part of the city to live in describe the public transport in your city say how your friend can meet new people there

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Dear Mia, How are things these days?. How are your family and boyfriend doing?. I'm writing

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letter in connection with you moving to my city for your new job.

First

of all, I would suggest you

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live near

downtown

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the downtown

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area like Nungambakkam or kodambakkam as there are

lot

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facilities

faculties

facilties

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facilities

available right at your

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doorstep

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door step

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In addition

, you can find numerous people from different parts of the world to socialize with.

Secondly

, if you are planning to live

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the

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downtown there are both

bus

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buses

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train

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and metro available five minutes walk. You can get a monthly pass from the government which will enable you to travel without any issues numerous times around the city.

Furthermore

, all

type

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types

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of public transport

are

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available

availble

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available

every 10 minutes for the use of people.

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

134 words

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