You are desirous of improving the state of your local area for the youth. Write a letter to the editor of a community magazine with ideas for how this could be done. In your letter, write how the number of leisure facilities available can be increased explain how these would benefit the area suggest some possible ways by which young people can be involved

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Dear Sir, I'm writing
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letter to convey my thoughts to enhance the situation of the Lincoln area in Subway town, especially considering the welfare of the youth. At present, no facilities are available for the youth to utilize during their free time. To achieve
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, barren land located in the northeastern part of the community can be converted into a community
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leisure
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can comprise a meeting hall for gathering, a dedicated studio for practising yoga and Zumba; a swimming pool, and a badminton area too. In recent times, youngsters face excruciating pressure at universities and workplaces which causes depression and detaches them from society. Implementation of the recreational
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can facilitate these youngsters to de-stress after work and evolve socially active. By doing physical activities, their concentration improves immensely, thereby, they can stay focused during work times. Apart from that, they would start developing interests in these workouts that aids them to lead a quality life. To implement these ideas, certified trainers in yoga, Zumba, swimming and other activities can visit the community
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during evenings and weekends and take classes that help the youngsters to get accustomed to the workout patterns.
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to that, competitions and cultural events can be conducted during festive holidays that might attract young people, allowing them to attend, mingle and enjoy the social gathering. I hope my suggestions are valid enough to get published in the magazine and looking forward to having them implemented soon. Yours sincerely, Jacob Anderson
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