Some people spend most of their live living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There are people who migrate to various parts of the world from their native
place
,
however
, few of them do not prefer to move anywhere from their
birth
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birthplace
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place
due to several reasons.
This
essay will discuss
about
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the reason
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reason
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reasons
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of
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not leaving birthplace,
advantages
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the advantages
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and disadvantages
to
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of
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living at
a
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the
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same or nearby
place
of birth with suitable reasoning. There are several reasons
to
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not to migrate from the original
place
.
Firstly
, some people prefer to have
a certain types
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certain types
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of weather only and if they change their body can not adjust with.
For instance
, due to very cold weather in
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northern
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the northen
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northen
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northern
part of Canada,
relocation
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the relocation
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rate is very high as
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to other provinces.
Secondly
, due to diverse
culture
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cultures
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, food habits vary from
place
to
place
and to manage with non-familiar foods could
led
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to digestive issues. There are various
advantages
of living at the same
place
of birth.
Firstly
, one is comfortable with the native language and
further
linguistic advancement is not required. The culture
,
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and familiarity with people could be the biggest benefit to live in the same
place
of
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forefathers.
Secondly
, the food habits, family business for livelihood, atmosphere and established relations with the community are the added
advantages
. Migration anywhere is always difficult,
initially
. To adjust
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language, food, weather and searching for new jobs demands high determination and perseverance. In conclusion, there are
advantages
and disadvantages to moving away from the native
place
.
However
, I believe staying in the native
place
is more advantageous considering
various
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hardships involved in migration to another
place
.
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