You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Meat consumption has been drastically reduced throughout the world. People believe that becoming a vegetarian or vegan could provide many

benefits

to them and to the entire earth as well. In my opinion, it has so much of

benefits

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people and

entire

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world.

To begin

with,

humans

who eat vegetarian items have enjoyed immense health

benefits

.

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,

recent

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a recent

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study from an American university has

showed

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that when

humans

eat

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plant-based

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plant based

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plant-based

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items have improved

the

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their

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health conditions and

less

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are less

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prone to

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diseases

dieases

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diseases

.

Further

, they can live with

serene

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mind and their sleeping conditions have improved a lot. One of the main reasons is that

human

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body is built to eat vegetarian foods even though many of them do not follow it.

Therefore

, vegetarian foods could give various advantages to

humans

.

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, when

less

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plant-based

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plant based

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plant-based

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items are consumed worldwide, it could reduce the production of

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livestock

livestocks

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livestock

.

Hence

,

wastages

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on

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water and land could be reduced significantly.

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, to run a typical chicken farm,

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average

avearge

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of 20,000

liters

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litres

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of water

used

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on monthly basis ,

also

acres of

lands

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land

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are used for beef farming.

Therefore

,

this

could help to develop an eco-friendly environment around the world.

Thus

,

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plant-based

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plant based

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plant-based

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consumption could provide multiple advantages to entire living beings. In conclusion, It is true that less intake of meats or

fishes

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fish

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could help people by bringing many health

benefits

and

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apply

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to the earth as a whole. Because

,

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humans

are built

such

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in such

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a way that they should not intake

meats

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meat

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and scarce resources could be saved by limiting animal farming.