You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Meat consumption has been drastically reduced throughout the world. People believe that becoming a vegetarian or vegan could provide many
benefits
to them and to the entire earth as well. In my opinion, it has so much of benefits
to
people and Change preposition
for
entire
world.
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the entire
To begin
with, humans
who eat vegetarian items have enjoyed immense health benefits
.For example
, recent
study from an American university has Add an article
a recent
showed
that when Change the verb form
shown
humans
eat Add a hyphen
plant-based
plant based
items have improved Add a hyphen
plant-based
the
health conditions and Change the word
their
less
prone to Add a missing verb
are less
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diseases
dieases
. Correct your spelling
diseases
Further
, they can live with serene
mind and their sleeping conditions have improved a lot. One of the main reasons is that Add an article
a serene
human
body is built to eat vegetarian foods even though many of them do not follow it. Correct article usage
the human
Therefore
, vegetarian foods could give various advantages to humans
.
In addition
, when less
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fewer
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plant-based
plant based
items are consumed worldwide, it could reduce the production of Add a hyphen
plant-based
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livestock
livestocks
. Correct your spelling
livestock
Hence
, wastages
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wastage
on
water and land could be reduced significantly. Change preposition
of
For instance
, to run a typical chicken farm, Correct your spelling
average
avearge
of 20,000 Correct article usage
a avearge
liters
of water Change the spelling
litres
used
on monthly basis , Add a missing verb
is used
also
acres of lands
are used for beef farming. Fix the agreement mistake
land
Therefore
, this
could help to develop an eco-friendly environment around the world. Thus
, Add a hyphen
plant-based
plant based
consumption could provide multiple advantages to entire living beings.
In conclusion, It is true that less intake of meats or Add a hyphen
plant-based
fishes
could help people by bringing many health Fix the agreement mistake
fish
benefits
and
to the earth as a whole. BecauseCorrect word choice
apply
,
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apply
humans
are built such
a way that they should not intake Change preposition
in such
meats
and scarce resources could be saved by limiting animal farming.Fix the agreement mistake
meat
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