Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him which team won describe the conditions on the day say how you felt about the match

Dear Sam, I hope you and your family are good. I am very excited to tell you that

last

weekend I have watched a final match of the IPL league from the Patel stadium in Pune with my family. I was glad It was the title competition between Delhi and Mumbai. Everyone knows that Delhi is a strong team but that day Mumbai played the game nicely to win their

first

title of the IPL. We entered the cricket stadium at 3pm. I was very happy to watch my favourite players from very close. But the match was delayed due to heavy rain which made us sad for a moment. But after the toss weather was clear and Mumbai Indian put a big total on the board. I was happy to watch the match with my parents

moreover

my favourite players performed nicely to win the game.

Although

, It was more fun if you were

also

there to enjoy

this

lovely moment. I hope to see you soon. Best wishes, Mark Jones

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