Some people say that cars are the best to use in cities while others think that bicycle are better. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

In recent years, the type of modern vehicles is expanded to make transportation easier.

Therefore

, some people believe that

car

is the best thing, which helps you to get somewhere in cities, while others have an idea that

bicycle

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is better.

This

essay will discuss both statements and will provide my own view.

To begin

with, cars are becoming more comfortable and popular. As,

this

type of vehicle is the best way to have

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freedom to be relaxed and safe the time, while individuals are able to get

the

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place they need, without spending more time and energy. Because driving the

car

is not a physically strenuous activity.

However

, some cars are not affordable to use or buy.

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means,

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costs of fuel and gas, which are important factors for a

car

, are rising frequently in some countries.

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Furthermore

Futhermore

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Furthermore

, those

fuel

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and gas are founded harmful to the environment in cities. Apart from

this

, increased

a

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number of

car

users in the city, the air pollution becoming unhealthier

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apply

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for humans health.

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, due to the

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statistics

statstics

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statistics

, 40 % of

reasons

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the reasons

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whole smog is affected by cars. What is more, using a

bisycle

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bicycle

has

also

some disadvantages. To bike it, individuals need more speed on their legs.

In addition

, it cannot be beneficial in hurry times. Contrary to these few backwords, biking is the most useful way of transportation.

Firstly

, while biking people lose calories as much as they do it.

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, in the majority of fitness

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there are some e-bicycles, which are included

to

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for

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necessary

neccessary

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necessary

occupant

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to be slim. In conclusion, driving a

car

will help with timing,

however

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it is

determinal

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determined

to the humans` health.

In contrast

, biking improves well-being. I strongly believe that bicycle is the better due to those statements.