An enjoyable job is far better than a high-salary or boring job, do you agree or disagree? What do you think is important?

In today's, world people are facing a major issue
that is
working in an organisation where they are not satisfied and they want something more or work in some other company which might be their dream or where they can be satisfied. The statement "working in a dream job is way better than doing the task in some place which offers a high salary" it's true. To start there are many merits for the company if it recruits a person who enjoys the work because the
first
merit is the employee will work while keeping his complete efforts because the motivation and dedication he will be having in that job will be high and will perform well even if the payout is less. The
second
reason is the employee will participate in group activities
additionally
he will
also
help in meetings and will try to take the company to a
next
level. The reason for working in an enjoyable place is primarily the stress level will be less compared because the person will have fun and
also
will power to complete the task he won't take it as a burden
furthermore
we can stick more in the same industry even for years since we will have fun working there
for example
if I start working in the apple because it's offering high salary
then
we are working for money and we are not working as satisfied
on the other hand
if I start working as a photographer since I love taking pictures
then
even if I get the low salary I'll be happy. To conclude
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