Write about the following topic. To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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a coin , there exist both sides

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the idea of consuming eatable

insects

to counter the growing

food

shortage due to the ramping up of the

population

. Some might agree with the prompt of intaking edible bugs whereas another group would rally against it stating the negative effects that could emerge. The positives of eating

insects

include numerous health benefits. Few pests or ants are packed with

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nutrition value and

also

with some advantageous chemical components which could benefit the people

intaking

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it.

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, recent research has proved that ants are high in protein and

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anti-oxidants which could help in improving one's health.

Thus

proving that there are some upsides in including them as a part of our diet. Adding upon

this

, there is another instrumental advantage which relates to the ubiquitous nature of certain bugs which

further

leads to

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market

price

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for them.

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the

insects

reproduce much faster than mammals which could help to support the demand better than

the

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animal meat. Looking onto the downsides, the

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foodchain

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might be affected if people start

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hunting

of

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specific

species

of

insects

due to the medical property it holds. Not only

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exacerbate the plummeting

population

of

such

species

due to consumption but

also

significantly introduces

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adverse impact on the

population

of the animals which are dependent on them.

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, in a village in China, a specific

species

of locusts were hunted frequently for

food

which

conversely

ended up

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affecting the

population

of the birds that feed upon them.

Thus

the

food

chain disturbance should be carefully handled since a crack in the

food

cycle will end up affecting humans

finally

.Even

insects

contribute immensely

for

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pollination which could

also

face issues if

population

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the population

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of

such

species

start dropping.

Thus

the

food

chain disturbance should be carefully handled since a crack in the

food

cycle will end up affecting humans

finally

.Even

insects

contribute immensely

for

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pollination which could

also

face issues if

population

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the population

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of

such

species

start dropping.