Some people think that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. they believe that this would benefit teenagers and the society. What is your opinion?

Recently, there has been a consensus among society members that advocate that adolescents ought to perform voluntary

missions

in their leisure time

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since these

missions

will have an imperative role in the development of their interpersonal

skills

and the amelioration of some

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issues. I am in agreement with

this

notion. In the following essay, my contention will be

further

scrutinized.

To begin

with, the engagement of young adults in charitable deeds has a pivotal impact on the growth of their interpersonal

skills

.

This

is because when they enrol in

missions

which involve assisting others, they acquire self-devotion virtues and improve their communication

skills

. An eminent example of

this

is the initiative which has been conducted by Cairo

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,which involved a plethora of university students during their summer vacation, in order to support under-

privilaged

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privileged

families in upper Egypt with food and clothing.

Thus

, not only does

this

trend allow its participants to enhance their

skills

, but it

also

fasten

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their maturation process

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the acquired sense of fulfilment.

Furthermore

, some divisions of the

sociologists

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community and I propose that

this

tendency is a pragmatic approach to mitigating a myriad of social problems

such

as poverty and famine. To

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illustrate

illlustrate

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illustrate

this

, young people always aspire to

achieving

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the

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sense of fulfilment;

therefore

, if they conduct

missions

to destitute areas to alleviate their problems by supplying

nutritionous

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nutritious

nutritional

food, they will meet

nations

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needs as well as

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their passion

towards

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fulfilment.

For instance

,

missions

launched by World Health Organization

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solved a myriad of problems that destitute nations encounter there.

Hence

, what can be said is that these arranged programmes for helping communities are indispensable. In conclusion, after

this

essay has manifested the above-mentioned points, it can be reiterated that

although

many countries have not adopted

this

approach, those who integrated youth

in

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charitable projects ,whether during their leisure times or summer vacations, witnessed a positive development of youth communication and social

skills

and benefited their communities as well as other communities in need. I am a staunch believer that governments should subsidize

such

projects in order that adolescents

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motivated to join them.