Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them to fully understand each other before deciding to get married. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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advantageous

as it permits more understanding of both parties involved. I strongly disagree with

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think that the average youth often has numerous experiences with

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prior to

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, life prior to

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should be enjoyed fully without stressing about living situations.

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elaborate on these points. Living with others is usually something that has been experienced various times before deciding to get married. As human

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many of us have lived with families for a majority of our lives, and

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has often extended to

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and friends as we matured.

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means that we are

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on how to be

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as well as what to avoid when living with others. Subjecting a couple to the same dwelling before ultimately living together is often unnecessary.

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, numerous surveys have stated that upon

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, many who chose to live with a significant other often said that romance was quickly brushed aside and

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functionality took precedence.

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highlights the disadvantage of house sharing prior to nuptials.

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, independence before

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is essential to self-growth. Prior to living with a future husband or wife the experiences of tumult and achievements should be personal as one better understands their stance on different issues, without being swayed by the opinion of their lovers. It is

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from navigating these times that they gain confidence,

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will ultimately aid them in lifelong

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. Take the example of those who choose to get very married at a young age, these individuals are often undecided on many issues and

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usually fail to do well

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their marriages.

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find out too late that they have polarising stances on many important issues. Had they taken the time to grow and expand their views whilst living independently they would have chosen a better life partner. In conclusion, Choosing to

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with a potential spouse

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a wise decision. Individuals are often experienced on

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more time should be spent developing themselves and their goals.