IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 7

Government should close companies that produce toxic waste materials without their own waste treatments facility in order to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#government #companies #waste #materials #treatments #facility #environment
While some people think that the government should close the companies which produce toxic and poisonous waste without refining, other citizens and experts believe it is not necessary to do
this
. Let me claim my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin
, nowadays by keeping processing science and technology as well as the industrialization of companies some industrial associations produce their waste without any treatment which causes to lower the life quality of people. For these reasons, the vast majority of inhabitants ask the government to close down these cooperatives.
On the other hand
, many other members of the public and specialists know the existence of them necessary seeing that their plenty of benefits.
For instance
, job creation, helping the economic cycle and producing beneficial products
therefore
, they guess for developing and extending society the existence of all industrial units is urgent since their merits outweigh their drawbacks. If factories going to close many families face crucial matters and working is even more important than a healthy environment. In conclusion, in my point of view, it seems that governments should put time, effort and money to help experts and trust them to find a solution to
this
 issue. I suppose manufacturing units should not be closed since many inhabitants and their
families'
Correct your spelling
families
show examples
 lives are dependent.
In addition
, manufactured products are entirely beneficial and necessary.
Thus
, I totally disagree with closing factories and argue that the government should tackle mentioned difficulties and
also
 by giving facilities to promote the solving process.
Submitted by saeedforoghi538 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: