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Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
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exchange
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programs
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 are gaining traction and some teachers believe that international
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exchange
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 can positively influence all school
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.
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 phenomenon is beneficial to
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, but
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, both views of the argument will be discussed below.
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 with, international
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exchange
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 is the best option in order to broaden
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’ horizons. If there are foreign
students
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, they can learn a new language, and immerse themselves in a new culture. On top of that, local
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 will get to know new knowledge, so it might be beneficial for both sides to open their minds and I agree with
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. It has been proven by the USA as
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exchange
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programs
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 are popular there and the vast majority of pupils speak different languages and are familiar with customs, and
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 thanks to it.
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 example proves how much
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exchange
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programs
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 are essential for the development of all
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.
Although
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 it has pros, there is a major drawback of
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exchange
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 is a cultural shock leading to stress.
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 is because when a
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 stays far from home in a new environment among unknown people, and new culture, customs, mentality, and all these factors may result in triggering stress.
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, I disagree with
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 since international
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exchange
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,
in contrast
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, assists to escalate the awareness of people about different
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 and thereby averts cultural shock even if the
cultures
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 are completely different from each other. As an illustration, in Canada, where
exchange
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programs
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 are developed, a survey of foreign
students
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 showed that 80
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 of them do not combat cultural-related obstacles.
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, the majority do not experience problems in terms of culture. In conclusion, even though international
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exchange
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 may incur a cultural shock, there are the pros
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 as being more open-minded, exploring
cultures
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, and honing language skills. Taking into account the pros and cons, I think that disadvantage is overshadowed by its positive sides.
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