The increasing amount of violence that is shown regularly in films has been a cause of concern for some time. Such films make violence appear entertaining, exciting and even something to be copied. However, it seems to be increasingly clear that this development is causing problems in our society.
Nowadays, the film industry is more developed than ever.
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essay will discuss whether the usage of putting cruel Linking Words
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in a movie is bringing more benefits or giving the public more disadvantages.
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action
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the tense in those Linking Words
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as Mission Impossible and James Bond, Linking Words
people
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they are more entertained and can feel the full experience of the cinema because of the bass and the volume gets louder.
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scenes
can be a bad influence on kids. Use synonyms
For example
, children who study martial arts think that it is okay to use their knowledge of fighting with other Linking Words
people
. Fighting Use synonyms
scenes
in Use synonyms
movies
are supposed to show watchers about self-defence, but children don't fully understand that and can use it for the wrong purposes. Use synonyms
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, children will think that it is okay to carry self-defence weapons Linking Words
such
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can cause.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite