The increasing amount of violence that is shown regularly in films has been a cause of concern for some time. Such films make violence appear entertaining, exciting and even something to be copied. However, it seems to be increasingly clear that this development is causing problems in our society.
Nowadays, the film industry is more developed than ever.
People
often go to the cinema to watch new box office movies
. There are also
many hired actors that are capable of doing fighting actions. This
leads to more people
studying martial arts after watching those movies
. This
essay will discuss whether the usage of putting cruel scenes
in a movie is bringing more benefits or giving the public more disadvantages.
First
, movies
these days, especially action
movies
, are very interesting to watch. This
happened because people
are getting more excited when seeing action
scenes
, also
the tense in those scenes
is higher than in regular movies
. For example
, when watching high-rated action
movies
such
as Mission Impossible and James Bond, people
are paying attention more to the movies
because of the systematic fighting scenes
and hero-villain story plot, also
they are more entertained and can feel the full experience of the cinema because of the bass and the volume gets louder.
In contrast
, these action
scenes
can be a bad influence on kids. For example
, children who study martial arts think that it is okay to use their knowledge of fighting with other people
. Fighting scenes
in movies
are supposed to show watchers about self-defence, but children don't fully understand that and can use it for the wrong purposes. Also
, children will think that it is okay to carry self-defence weapons such
as knives. This
is the wrong idea that action
movies
can cause.
In conclusion, action
movies
can be entertaining and dangerous at the same time. There has to be an age limit for the watchers to enjoy these movies
. Kids who are underage are not supposed to watch extreme fighting scenes
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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