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Sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In general, to know the person will you should ask them in detail about all the personal
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. Some folk believe that personal material like hobbies and interests and whether they are married or single may be relevant and useful advice when they apply for jobs. While others disagree.
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 is important. It is relevant and useful to add personal material when applying for jobs. More addition, the company or worker prefer to ask for the details of the new employer to know more
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 about them.
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, most companies ask folk if they have children to have a clear picture of whose they accept them. For these reasons, giving complete detail is necessary for every institution.
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, some folk see it is not necessary to collect all personal material from the new employment . they think it is unusual
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, they just collect the necessary details. In order that
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the owner or the company boss will miss a lot of
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, if the worker asks immediately leave because his children are sick it is difficult for the boss to handle the situation because he didn't collect all the personal
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 from the worker in the beginning. In conclusion,
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 in the workplace. In my opinion, it is good to get as much as you can
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 from the new employees to know them better.
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