Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays each and every person’s life is filled with options.It is believed by some that there are innumerable choices available for us in the world.I would completely agree and
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and foremost,E-channeling has been started likely 20-30 years.In that ,case
people
can make an appointment with any health care professional according to their necessities and matter of sickness.When you go to the recognized website of e-commerce they may display a plethora of health professionals which you can select
accordingly
and make an appointment for the date you feel convenient.For an instance,in my own ,experience I had to make a consultation for my mom and I searched the specific area they specialized in and there were many names with the reviews and rates.
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makes life easier than staying in the queue to channel a doctor.
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and most importantly,how many
people
are obsessed with online shopping?we could say the unknown number of
people
.Due to the technological improvement of current ,
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the choices we need to make are at our fingertips.If we visit the clothing site we can look according to our choice and pay for something that suits best without any hindrance and if there are any faults with the product that purchased can exchange easily.Because there is a variety of products available .
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,it is really effective rather than visiting a boutique and buying yourself.
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shows that
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shops and
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making purchases online has increased. To conclude,I think due to the fact that services like e-channelling and online shopping,which are available plenty of options aid
people
with their life more than ever.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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