Write a letter to your neighbour who is having animals in his/her garden. You and your family members are having problems with the animals - introduce yourself - tell the problem - suggest solutions

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Dear Ahmet I am writing to you to complain because there are some reasons. You have so

much

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animals in your backyard and

this

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is a problem for me . First of all , my name is Furkan Oz and ı live with my sister

and

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apply

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home

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number is

the

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205 number

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that

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which

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is near your

home

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. As you know , you have three

dogs

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and two cats.The cats are not a problem because they live in your

home

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but the

dogs

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are very problem because they live in your backyard. They sometimes come to my garden and they always eat my meats which are delicious. I can suggest two solutions if you want. first

one

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apply

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, you can bind your

dogs

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in your

home

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when you are not at

home

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other idea

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, you can keep your

dogs

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inside the house. I hope , you can solve these problems and we are able to

happy

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again. I look forward to catching up with you soon Yours Faithfully Furkan Oz

furkan_fener_03Mon Jul 25 2022

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task achievement

Provide a clearer introduction to your main complaint in the opening paragraph.

coherence and cohesion

Make sure to separate your ideas into distinct paragraphs for better organization.

task achievement

Use more varied vocabulary to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

positive

The letter has a friendly and polite tone, which is great for neighborly communication.

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You clearly explained the problem with the animals in your neighbor's garden.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

172 words

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