Nowadays, coping with
life
is much easier and the opportunities we have are enormous
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to
life
100 years prior. I partly agree with
this
statement.
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life
is less difficult to live in
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because our ancestors had already solved many technical problems that occur in our everyday activities and living.
Firstly
, they have created many inventions that could tackle our issues in tasks and labour,
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a great deal of material for entertainment.
For example
, there are many new forms of entertainment, like televisions, the internet,
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music online to replace the old practice of going to
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or listening to music in concerts.
In addition
, medical development
also
helps us deal with many of which
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incurable diseases back
then
.
For instance
, Louis Pasteur developed
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vaccines for rabies, which was a very dangerous disease.
However
, living in
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time
also
has multiple drawbacks. Due to the ease of
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living conditions, some
people
lack many factors that would consist of an ideal
life
. Take hard work for
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example, many
people
would have been heavily reliant on machines and
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of technology to solve their jobs.
Consequently
,
people
can face serious trouble with their laziness. Or say creativity,
people
won't seek something new,
instead
only aiming for small insignificant purposes in
life
.
In conclusion,
life
now was somewhat better than 100 years ago, but
also
comes with a disadvantage. While now we can live better and safer with more medical,
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, we
also
see a decline in the quality of many
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life
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.