The growing number if overweight people is putting a burden on the healthcare system in an efforts to deal with the issues involved. Some people think that the best way to solve this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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overeighted

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overweight

overweighted

people

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is drastically increasing, the experts start to discuss

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introducing more physical educational

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activities

activites

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activities

in the school curriculum to reduce the

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of

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, some experts claim that physical education

lessons

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are not relevant to decreasing the

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of overweighted

people

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essay will argue both sides of them.

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of all, adopting more physical

educational

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lessons

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is less pricey than reducing the

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of adults

obesities

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through the healthcare budget. The cost of reducing the

adults

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obesities

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is absolutely costly.

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, overweight

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people

poeple

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people

have to go to see a doctor and take several medical

exminations

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examinations

examination

to

obeserve

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observe

what kind of diseases

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overweight patients have. If the diseases are dreadful to

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overweight

people

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the

people

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have to charge for a massive amount of money

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the

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healthcaresystem

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healthcare system

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childhood, the only costs to pay are the salaries

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the physical educators and facilities.

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, if more physical

activities

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are forced to be adopted, some

children

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are likely to be injured

physicall

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physically

and mentally. Some

children

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might love to play around outside, but some

children

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dislike to undergo outside plays and there might be even

children

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who

are not shine

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at physical

activities

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cause the

children

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to feel as overwhelmed as they hate the

activities

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which can give mental disorders to

children

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results in placing a more burden on the healthcare system to cure

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mental health. In summary, including physical

lessons

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in the school curriculum is less costly than paying for

adults

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obesities

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through

budget

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system.

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, more

activities

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can cause more expense to cure the mental disorder that results from the physical

lessons

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