QUESTION You are a member of your town’s public library. You received the following message: Dear Library Member, We are updating our services and would like your input. What kind of books or materials should we add? Do you think we should also organize workshops or reading clubs? Please share your thoughts. Sincerely, Library Coordinator 1 - Informal Letter Write to a friend who also uses the library. Share your opinion and ideas about the changes. Write about 50 words.

Dear Ali, It has been a

while

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since we

last

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talked. I hope you are doing well. I am writing because I have some news about our library. Honestly, they should add more

audio books

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audiobooks

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and reference books. In my view, they should

also

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organize

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organise

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reading clubs. What do you think? Best wishes, Lola

maxudayberganova

Mar 4, 2026

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task response

Add a short list of ideas to show your points clearly.

coherence

Use simple linking words to show how ideas connect, e.g., 'also', 'moreover'.

grammar

Check small grammar fix: 'audiobooks' is one word.

tone

Friendly and warm tone that fits an informal letter.

content

Gives clear opinion and asks for your friend's view.

relevance

Shows you know the reader as a library user.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

54 words

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