The growing number if overweight people is putting a burden on the healthcare system in an efforts to deal with the issues involved. Some people think that the best way to solve this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
As the
number
of overweighted Use synonyms
people
is drastically increasing, the experts start to discuss introducing more physical education Use synonyms
activities
in the school curriculum to reduce the Use synonyms
number
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However
, some experts claim that physical education Linking Words
lessons
are not relevant to decreasing the Use synonyms
number
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people
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This
essay will argue both sides of them.
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First
of all, adopting more physical education Linking Words
lessons
is less pricey than reducing the Use synonyms
number
of adults Use synonyms
obesities
through the healthcare budget. The cost of reducing the adults' Use synonyms
obesities
is absolutely costly. Use synonyms
For example
, overweight Linking Words
people
have to go to see a doctor and take several medical examinations to observe what kind of diseases overweight patients have. If the diseases are dreadful to overweight Use synonyms
people
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then
the Linking Words
people
have to charge a massive amount of money to their healthcare system. So, if more physical educational systems are introduced from childhood, the only costs to pay are the salaries of the physical educators and facilities.
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On the other hand
, if more physical Linking Words
activities
are forced to be adopted, some Use synonyms
children
are likely to be injured physically and mentally. Some Use synonyms
children
might love to play around outside, but some Use synonyms
children
dislike to undergo outside plays and there might be even Use synonyms
children
who do not shine at physical Use synonyms
activities
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This
cause the Linking Words
children
to feel as overwhelmed as they hate the Use synonyms
activities
which can give mental disorders to Use synonyms
children
. And Use synonyms
this
results in placing a more burden on the healthcare system to cure mental health.
In summary, including physical Linking Words
lessons
in the school curriculum is less costly than paying for adult's Use synonyms
obesities
through the budget system. Use synonyms
However
, more Linking Words
activities
can cause more expense to cure the mental disorder that results from the physical Use synonyms
lessons
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