Some people claim that it is immoral to exploit animals, and that the government should prohibit using animals for scientific research. In the meantime, others argue that exploiting animals is crucial for allowing scientists to learn more about human biology and health. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Scientists, nowadays,

use

creatures for their research purposes.

This

has led to the argument that whether

government

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should forbid the

use

of

animals

or should allow

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continuous

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use

of it because wildlife is an essential tool for researchers.

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my

views

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, too much

use

of

animal

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animals

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can lead to extinction.

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, if we fully ban

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creatures, there will be nothing to pass on to coming up generations.

Additionally

, I totally agree that

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can study

animals

for their academic purposes. Part of a

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animal that we see today comes from invasion from experts. They invade

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to habitats of creatures and sometimes kill them in order to take their bodies.

As a result

, many species are endangered and some are

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the brink of extinction.

This

can lead to devastation in an ecosystem. For

instances

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,

it

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a rat

die

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, a cat will struggle to survive because they consume

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.

However

, most of

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contents

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that

are

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taught in

class

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came from discoveries and

researches

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. If we disallow

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scientists

scienctists

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scientists

to continue

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their

thier

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researches

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with

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animals

, what will be taught in school for children? There will be no knowledge and no history for younger generations.

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, we know that we are not the

first

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to live in the world because experts have found out about fossils and many antique things. We

also

know how to protect ourselves from contagious diseases from

animals

because there

are

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scientific information behind it. In my opinion, I think that researches

from

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animals

have a great impact on

children

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educational

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. Kids get to learn about their world, and more than that, they get to appreciate

the

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nature and

animal

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animals

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.

Also

, they will acquire many skills

of

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protecting themselves. To conclude,

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exploitation

exploition

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of

habitants

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habitats

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for studies can have a harmful effect

to

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ecosystem

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the ecosystem

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and

others animal

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other animals

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.

Nevertheless

, studying through wildlife provides children

great

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souces

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sources

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of learning.

Hence

, I believe that we should continue our

use

of

animal

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animals

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for scientific

researches

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research

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.