You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Give contact details for when you are away • Give instructions about how to care for your pet • Describe other household duties

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Dear Sam, I hope you doing well. I am writing to express my joy you have accepted my request to look after my pets and house

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I am away on vacation. I truly appreciate your support and immense love for my pets. I wanted to explain some vital duties which can not be ignored. In case, I forgot something you call me on

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number 183982929. The primary issue is with pets as they need proper food on time and I already ordered extra food for them which I stored on the left side of a kitchen drawer, please do not forget about their daily walks. I will be away from 21 December and arriving on 1st of January.

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, you can access to internet and password written on the kitchen table and feel free to use any programs on the television. I know you love chips which I already put on the side of the sofa table. Please let me know if you need anything from me and I will give you surety that you will be paid for

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help. yours lovingly, Alex

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coherence and cohesion

Add a brief introduction to provide context before listing tasks and contact information.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure each paragraph conveys one main idea to enhance clarity and structure.

task achievement

Avoid minor grammatical errors for a more polished response, such as "access to internet" should be "access the internet" and "I hope you doing well" should be "I hope you are doing well."

task achievement

The letter has a warm and friendly tone, suitable for writing to a friend.

task achievement

Contact details, pet care instructions, and household duties are clearly provided, fulfilling the task requirements.

coherence and cohesion

The letter opens with an appropriate greeting and closes warmly.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

186 words

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