More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Obesity in children has become a common problem all over the world due to the advancement of fast food culture. In
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,essay we will look into the reasons for these issues and how they impact the countries.
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Firstly
, children tend to eat more finger and fried food than eating something healthy. Linking Words
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, junk and ready-to-eat foods are more easily available in the stores than healthy replacements Linking Words
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as salad boxes. Linking Words
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, foods like pizza, burgers and sodas are more satisfying to the carvings of people since they are high in fat and carbohydrates. Linking Words
Secondly
, the lesser prices for fast food. Linking Words
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, Mc Donald's burger is cheaper than a store brought salad box. Linking Words
Moreover
, lack of physical activity is another reason for an increase in overweight.
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causes leads to many effects and One of the most common effects of Linking Words
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problem is the increase of new age diseases and health issues. Linking Words
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, children who are battling with their weight undergo bullying and mental trauma which can lead to depression. Physically, Linking Words
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leads to health issues Linking Words
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as thyroid, PCOS and high blood pressure, thereby increasing medical expenses.
To conclude, if the concern of overweight teenagers is not addressed right now, it will continue to grow as a threat to wealthy nations. Linking Words
Therefore
, if a country needs to be progressive, they need to work on the problem of obese youngsters.Linking Words
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