Some people prefer to travel around town by car, while others prefer public transit such as bus, train, or subway. Discuss both these positions and give your own opinion.

People
have different ways of thinking about travelling , some of them would like to
travel
by public
transport
while
others prefer to commute on their own
while
. In
this
essay, I will discuss both the view and conclude with my opinion.
Firstly
, there is no doubt that public
transport
is the best way of commuting from one place to another because travelling by government
transport
is economical and
in addition
, it
also
protects our planet from air
pollution
.
For instance
, a recent survey from the Times of India revealed that 80% of
people
in Japan prefer to
travel
by public
transport
to save their country from
pollution
so I believe
that is
why Japan has less
pollution
than other countries.
On the other hand
, Some
people
always prefer to
travel
in a car
while
roaming here and there. They find that travelling in their own vehicle is more comfortable and easy .
People
think that travelling by bus or on any public
transport
is more time consuming
thus
they have to wait in a long queue to board a bus .
However
,commuting in their own automobile is more convenient as they can choose music of their own choice music and routes as well.
For Example
, If I go to the office on public
transport
it takes almost one hour to reach the office and in my own car, I reach the office in twenty minutes. So travelling in own automobile is more efficient as compared to public
transport
.
To conclude
, To save our planet we should use public
transport
then
only we can get rid of air
pollution
.
This
is my suggestion to authorities is increase the bus frequency and other facilities as well so that
people
are happy be
travel
in public vehicles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • comfort
  • freedom
  • privacy
  • carbon footprint
  • cost-effective
  • traffic congestion
  • alleviate
  • urban infrastructure
  • balanced approach
  • peak traffic hours
  • commute
  • personal preference
  • lifestyle
  • sustainable transportation
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